What’s missing from Part I is the opposing argument to this first point.

The paper needs to add opposing views after each paragraph that says why constant media is terrible. Why could it be a good thing? They must be scholarly sources and the paper needs to be in MLA format.

“What’s missing from Part I is the opposing argument to this first point.

Your first in-text citation lists all the authors. It is only necessary to use the first last name followed by et al which is what you did with the citations that followed.

Page or paragraph numbers come at the end of the citation, not right after the name when you start with according to.

When a citation with the same author follows the one before it with that author without a different source between them, it is not necessary to name the author or source again. All you need is the page or paragraph. ” – Teacher